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Recent Comments for Fantasy
| #10866 | The Fantastic Foal |
Emotion
Yes, I could talk about how the characters feel. That would improve things.
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Ian James Patterson
18th Jul 2016 8:04am
| #10865 | The Fantastic Foal |
good story - add some flavouring?
Congratulations on your book! The prologue tells the story well. One question i have - is there a way to infuse a layer of emotional appeal through your synopsis - so that the reader feels emotional attachment to the outcome. Unfortunately i don't know how to do this exactly, hopefully you will!
16th Jul 2016 1:47am
| #10857 | Chapter 1 |
Vampire reveals his secrets
Gentle unveiling of the secrets of the friendly gorgeous vampire
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| #10856 | Voltaiire |
Meeting a Romantic Fantastical being
A lovely-told story of inviting into your home a fantastical being oozing romance and mystique - well done Tryynity.
2nd Jul 2015 9:04am
| #10844 | Free Will |
Funny
Humanity 2.0. Sounds like a good idea to me. Even God can learn from mistakes. We are such a glitch ridden people.
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| #10832 | Free Will |
greatbstuff (honestly)
well John, that one is funny and clever - gut gemacht !<br>
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| #10802 | Front of the Pack |
Promising
Good work Mike, I'm looking forward to chapter two. Like your opening and how you make everything plausible - then left us wondering. Good work.
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savage flame
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