#10862

Not Skin Deep

Calls to us

This well-structured poem calls to us with deep uncertainty of getting things back the way they were and the possibility of some irretrievable loss. Poignant.

#10802

Front of the Pack

Promising

Good work Mike, I'm looking forward to chapter two. Like your opening and how you make everything plausible - then left us wondering. Good work.

#10785

Lessons Learned

about not noticing

insightful poem about how we don't notice the good around us because of the bad

#10768

Mykies Encounter With A Bald Eagle.

An eagle & a young boy

Sounds like the making of a fine story. Much polishing is required here though. Thanks for sharing your writing.

#10762

Mykies Encounter With A Bald Eagle.

Mykies Encounter With A Bald Eagle.

Your comment is of honour,just only written on a short story,I am happy to go forward with the illustrations and put this book together.I realize the drawing of a bald eagle is a task,as I must practise my skills. thank u for the comments. regards Janice Connors.

#10761

Mykies Encounter With A Bald Eagle.

bird bonding

the makings of a story between boy and wild eagle

#10697

3 - Ewan, Moon and Galem

the battle

I'm not usually one who liikes or even try's to stick to real historical accuracy when retelling something from it in a tale, but the battle of culloden is unique I guess plus knowing some history does help with the describing of some things

#10695

Ewan and the Fire Beacons

Ewans tale

glad you liked this story. It was supposed to be a one off chapter/short story thing, but as you can see it sort of grew arms and legs - wierd in patches I know but what do you expect being written during nights I could'nt sleep.<br><br>One thing of interest is that Mcwho is sort of based on Ewans uncle.