#10847

Chapter 36

Lust and sex, and calm returns

Calm returns after some self-pleasuring followed by sex. But how long can it last?

#10846

Chapter 35

Dramatic and intense

Another victim, killed with slow but dramatic intensity. She writes a bold message in blood afterwards.

#10845

Chapter 34

Action-packed

Action packed chapter, it should be easy for Monique smooth the rough edges and make it as tidy as previous chapters.

#10844

Free Will

Funny

Humanity 2.0. Sounds like a good idea to me. Even God can learn from mistakes. We are such a glitch ridden people.

#10843

Dead Man Talking

Too Short

I like the theme. The prophet Elijah should definitely be in more fantasy stories, and the medical twist was educating. I think the story should be double in length. Elijah should go into detail with his warnings.

#10842

The CO Cabin

An Intriguing futuristic story, well told.

This is a mildly sf narrative that very smoothly and clearly incorporates bizarre concepts - implanted field organs - without needing to incorporate lengthy exposition.<br>I was not entirely convinced of the male protagonist's motives, but was carried along by the sheer force of the narrative (maybe it has field organs too!).<br>Interesting comments on clothes and power - I had somewhat similar thoughts myself, when I visited the local nude beach. <br>My only suggestion - needs some blood to round off the tale.

#10841

The Secret

Languid Dreamy Love

This poem by Wright Underwood pulls on me gently into his world of languid dreamy love.

#10840

Chapter 33

Not for the faint-hearted

A blood-soaked sexual encounter ends with two young men bound alongside each other and both very dead. The killer writes a message for the cop. Will the curtains fall from his eyes at last?