#10844

Free Will

Funny

Humanity 2.0. Sounds like a good idea to me. Even God can learn from mistakes. We are such a glitch ridden people.

#10843

Dead Man Talking

Too Short

I like the theme. The prophet Elijah should definitely be in more fantasy stories, and the medical twist was educating. I think the story should be double in length. Elijah should go into detail with his warnings.

#10842

The CO Cabin

An Intriguing futuristic story, well told.

This is a mildly sf narrative that very smoothly and clearly incorporates bizarre concepts - implanted field organs - without needing to incorporate lengthy exposition.<br>I was not entirely convinced of the male protagonist's motives, but was carried along by the sheer force of the narrative (maybe it has field organs too!).<br>Interesting comments on clothes and power - I had somewhat similar thoughts myself, when I visited the local nude beach. <br>My only suggestion - needs some blood to round off the tale.

#10841

The Secret

Languid Dreamy Love

This poem by Wright Underwood pulls on me gently into his world of languid dreamy love.

#10840

Chapter 33

Not for the faint-hearted

A blood-soaked sexual encounter ends with two young men bound alongside each other and both very dead. The killer writes a message for the cop. Will the curtains fall from his eyes at last?

#10839

Chapter 32

Dark Juxtapositions

A chapter of dark juxtapositions and conflict between friends and lovers, good writing from Monique.

#10838

The magical mermaid princess

Cute start to mermaid tale

A cute start to what is hopefully a continuing story about mermaids and magic.

#10837

Chapter 31

Poignant recognition

Kathy buries evidence of her secret life but is brought to poignant recognition with a chance encounter with her friend. Filled with feeling.